tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1676865176121935352.post4447808396265403168..comments2024-01-16T10:26:13.480-08:00Comments on Another Slightly Scary Story: The Black Kiss by C. L. RavenAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12563209830154165271noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1676865176121935352.post-47276986479955879092011-10-27T23:25:31.131-07:002011-10-27T23:25:31.131-07:00If all of these people don't make you understa...If all of these people don't make you understand how good you are, I don't know what will. Keep writing.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563209830154165271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1676865176121935352.post-77912711276962714992011-10-27T09:40:22.074-07:002011-10-27T09:40:22.074-07:00Thank you so much everyone. Your comments mean so ...Thank you so much everyone. Your comments mean so much to us. If we blush any more, planes will crash and we can't handle that sort of guilt :DAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1676865176121935352.post-54831920547676872562011-10-26T13:35:08.648-07:002011-10-26T13:35:08.648-07:00superb !!!!!gripping,exceptional writing,last line...superb !!!!!gripping,exceptional writing,last line made me smile. You both should be extremely proud of this outstanding piece of writing and yes it is very descriptive but isnt that what a great horror story should be like !get you gripped,cringing and hooked and intrigued from the very first section! amazing talent you girls have there ! well done and keep going !Sarahnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1676865176121935352.post-40974704209584446382011-10-26T12:19:32.430-07:002011-10-26T12:19:32.430-07:00Loved it! I've had daydreams about some of my ...Loved it! I've had daydreams about some of my ex-boyfriends, very similar to this story. It's a good thing I write :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1676865176121935352.post-41959504272440579162011-10-26T12:14:22.679-07:002011-10-26T12:14:22.679-07:00Strangely beautiful! I think you've captured ...Strangely beautiful! I think you've captured the degree of rage a woman scorned is capable of...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1676865176121935352.post-38351674434400460512011-10-26T11:11:46.380-07:002011-10-26T11:11:46.380-07:00I love the style of your writing - all or nothing ...I love the style of your writing - all or nothing - no greyscale. Delightful,yet disturbingly descriptive writing with a slash of humour tossed in for good measure. I too couldn't stop reading but for me, the end came too soon. I was yearning for more.Lynettenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1676865176121935352.post-71279597624756005082011-10-26T08:20:27.235-07:002011-10-26T08:20:27.235-07:00thank you all so much for taking the time to read ...thank you all so much for taking the time to read this and comment. We're so glad you liked it, even if it did creep you out. Sorry about that :) Your comments have really made us smile. It's nice getting feedback - lets us know we're not all alone in our batcave. We promise if we get another chance to be showcased by Draven, the next one won't be as graphic. Though it might stillAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1676865176121935352.post-44287976680974233672011-10-26T07:01:52.962-07:002011-10-26T07:01:52.962-07:00Wow. Incredibly vivid and wonderful mix of interna...Wow. Incredibly vivid and wonderful mix of internal narrative and dialog. Great word choices and I don't think I'll be able to shake this image for hours. If this weren't fiction you guys would be really frightening. As it is you're just really scary. Nice work! :-)<br />~KateKH LeMoynehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13769804523563554027noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1676865176121935352.post-37878953589984204502011-10-26T06:19:35.475-07:002011-10-26T06:19:35.475-07:00This was a very good, albeit disturbing story. I w...This was a very good, albeit disturbing story. I was raised on horror, and even I cringed a little at the end. Well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1676865176121935352.post-83305693956053316102011-10-26T06:12:24.425-07:002011-10-26T06:12:24.425-07:00Completely gruesome, completely creepy and most ho...Completely gruesome, completely creepy and most horrific. That said; I couldn't stop reading. Would hate to see it on the screen. A little more dramatic than "keying" the prize driving machine of some cheating louse.farawayeyeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17578277501054242356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1676865176121935352.post-29170835919607026322011-10-26T04:43:53.916-07:002011-10-26T04:43:53.916-07:00Wow! Gruesome, romantic and amazingly well written...Wow! Gruesome, romantic and amazingly well written. I loved it.<br />Thanks...Pat Tilletthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17699973774273291205noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1676865176121935352.post-20147384432315667082011-10-26T04:42:40.462-07:002011-10-26T04:42:40.462-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.Pat Tilletthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17699973774273291205noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1676865176121935352.post-62433736339415300592011-10-26T04:35:30.910-07:002011-10-26T04:35:30.910-07:00lol glad you all liked it. We promise, most of our...lol glad you all liked it. We promise, most of our work isn't that graphic, though being Goths, our work is on the dark side. Though usually with a bit of humour thrown in. Thanks Draven for choosing our story. We're so pleased to see it up here.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1676865176121935352.post-85636493531975209662011-10-26T03:50:24.549-07:002011-10-26T03:50:24.549-07:00Oh, wow. That just creeped the hell out of me! Lik...Oh, wow. That just creeped the hell out of me! Like Michael, I admire the writing very much, but I don't think I could read for long! Still, I couldn't stop!Amie Kaufmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15116472165351759477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1676865176121935352.post-55608882013952382042011-10-26T02:25:56.855-07:002011-10-26T02:25:56.855-07:00I love a good horror story, especially when the wo...I love a good horror story, especially when the woman is the crazed lunatic. lolMiranda Hardyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17880449368013410349noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1676865176121935352.post-27381921202836349182011-10-26T02:19:14.370-07:002011-10-26T02:19:14.370-07:00Vanyel- Thank you for stopping in and reading. Eve...Vanyel- Thank you for stopping in and reading. Every Halloween needs a little goth.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563209830154165271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1676865176121935352.post-15086045587152964172011-10-25T22:35:51.156-07:002011-10-25T22:35:51.156-07:00Beautiful descriptions. The words have a way of ma...Beautiful descriptions. The words have a way of making the gruesome act into a most erotic love scene. It is very Gothic, but with the popularity of material like "Dexter" I can see this style becoming much more mainstream.vanyelmoonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07976788895311992176noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1676865176121935352.post-82629138681982695392011-10-25T13:44:27.554-07:002011-10-25T13:44:27.554-07:00Michael - These two can certainly write. They have...Michael - These two can certainly write. They have had a some great success, getting published with Dark Moon Digest. This story is very graphic, though. Good thing we have that advisory sticker up. Thanks for stopping by. I hope you read our next couple stories.<br /><br />DravenAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563209830154165271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1676865176121935352.post-36686158306027807012011-10-25T13:32:39.232-07:002011-10-25T13:32:39.232-07:00Wow...that is...hmmm beyond words. The description...Wow...that is...hmmm beyond words. The description is incredible but I don't think I could enjoy reading something as horrific as that for very long. In my younger years, I liked reading things like American Psycho and Silence of the Lambs/Hannibal...but eep...the bone cutting...the heart spooning... I think I shall pass on more. But it is great writing for the audience to which this is Michael Offutt, Phantom Readerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10557969104886174930noreply@blogger.com